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Friday, July 20, 2012

Fallacious Perceptions



           It was a warm yet breezy spring day. My girl Nia and I were walking downtown doing some shopping in the local boutiques. I must admit that both of us deserved this shopping spree. We work very hard. Nia has been my closest friend since I moved here a little over five years ago. I guess the saying of opposites attract is true because Nia and I are just that, opposites. Nia’s a country girl, while I'm from the city. Nia is conservative while I am a little more out there. The list goes on, but all in all, regardless of anything, that’s my girl. By the way, my name is Rene.

          After being downtown for a few hours, Nia and I decided to have lunch at one of the restaurants in the area that had an outside patio. We ordered our meals. There were others out on the patio also, most notably, two brothers sitting in the corner, who kept staring at us every chance they got. I have to admit, Nia and I were on point and we liked the attention that was coming from the corner.

          Our food arrived. Nia and I ate and conversed. We talked about our work week and upcoming goals. Both of us had high ranking nine to five jobs in corporate America. Upon finishing our meals, the waitress cleared our table, and Nia took care of the tab. We continued our conversation at the table.

          “Oh my gosh”, Nia country ass said in loud whisper. “I think they’re coming over here”

          I looked up, only to see the two gentlemen from the corner walking in our direction. They were both nicely dressed. The one leading the way was a big hunk of a man. I mean muscles bulging like he worked out every day all day. Also, to his advantage, he was handsome as fuck. He had tats displaying on both arms. The sight of this man was making my mouth water, or maybe it was me looking at the print in his pants that did so.

          His friend on the other hand, was kind of on the slim side and a little dorky looking. Well maybe not dorky looking, he just wasn’t my type. He had no type of swag about himself. From what I could see, the guy had no tats, no piercings, no nothing. He was just plain, but it didn’t matter, because it wasn’t him who had my attention.

          “Hi ladies” the hunk said in a deep manly voice that made me want to get up, pull his dick out, and suck it right then and there. “My name is Brent and this is my homeboy Chad”.

          “Hello”, Chad timidly chimed in.

          “Hi” Nia and I replied simultaneously.

          Brent continued talking, “We saw you two sitting here and we couldn’t resist coming over. Do you mind if we sit with you?”

          “No, no we don’t mind.” I blurted out with no hesitation.

          Nia gave me a funny look, but I didn’t care. There was no way that I was going to pass up this gorgeous hunk of a man.

          The two friends sat with us. Brent sat by Nia while Chad flopped his ass down next to me. “I’m Rene, and this is Nia” I said, politely introducing us.

          Brent carried on a conversation with Nia and me while Chad would chime in every so often. When Brent spoke, most of his attention was in Nia’s direction. This couldn’t be happening. I had to get his attention on me somehow. I had to gain his interest.

          “So Brent, are you single?” I asked abruptly.

          “Yes I am. As a matter of fact, and so is Chad.”

          Damn a Chad! I kept throwing questions in Brent’s direction. I could see my plan working as his focus shifted towards me. We laughed and flirted slightly with one another. Then what I didn’t want to happen, happened.

          “Well ladies” Brent said as he scooted his chair back and stood up. “I’m afraid that we have to run.”

          “So soon?” Nia asked.

          Chad, Nia, and I stood up. Brent pulled out a pen and began writing on a cocktail napkin. “These are our numbers”, he said leaving the napkin on the table. “Feel free to call at any time.

          The guys gave us hugs and left Nia and me at the table. Grabbing the napkin, I asked Nia which of the two that she wanted to call. She said that it didn’t matter to her because she wasn’t really interested in a man at the time. I told her that I was going to take Brent’s number and suggested that she hook up with Chad. Nia gave me another of her funny looks. I told her not to be like that because he might just turn out to be the perfect man, knowing good and well that I didn’t believe anything that I was telling her. I put Brent’s number in my phone and Nia took Chad’s.      

          
           I gave Brent a call that week and we hit it off pretty well. From our phone conversations and texts, the sexual chemistry was building up between the two of us. Brent would tell me or send me messages of how he wants to eat me out or how he’s going to fuck my brains out. All I could think about is that muscular body controlling me. My panties got drenched at the thoughts of what he would tell me. Good lawd, I wanted that man!

          I decided to call Nia one night to tell her about what was going on with me and my new muse. I told her all about Brent and the things that he would say to me. Nia didn’t seem too enthused about it. I think that deep down inside, she really wanted Brent, but to hell with that. That piece of meat was mine.

          Brent and I finally set a date for us to meet up. On the day of, he came to pick me up from my home. I had an overnight bag because the plan was for me to stay the night at his place. Brent and I went to watch a free play that was happening at the park. The play was cool but Brent complained about most of it. Leaving the park, Brent then took me to a bar where happy hour was going on. Upon exiting the car, Brent headed into the bar before me, which I thought was odd. I thought that maybe he just wanted to make sure that we could get a seat. We ordered a few drinks in which Brent even complained about the service and he refused to leave a tip.

          By this time, all I wanted to do was go chill. On the way to his apartment, Brent would make remarks of how he couldn’t wait to have me and how he planned on giving me the best night of my life. Hearing his words made my pussy moist. Little did he know, I had some tricks up my sleeve as well.

          Getting out of the car, we headed up to Brent’s apartment. He unlocked the door, headed inside, and told me to lock it behind myself. I walked in with my bag in tow. Brent had disappeared, so I sat down on the couch in front of the TV. He appeared moments later and sat beside me. He wrapped his arm around me, and turned the TV on to Sports Center. Brent started fondling my breast with his hand. I felt my body heating up. When I looked over in his direction, Brent immediately began kissing me, forcing his body onto mine. I leaned back as he positioned himself. I parted my legs so that he could come in a little closer. His body weighed down on me not allowing me to move much. Damn, I longed to feel this man inside of me. There was no doubt about it, I was ready.

          Brent retracted his body from me, took me by the hand, and led me down the corridor into the bathroom. He turned on the shower and undressed himself. What a sight. This was the perfect specimen and he was all mines. Getting into the shower, Brent looked at me and told me to get in. I did as I was told. Once inside, Brent gave me a wash cloth and some soap. He was already washing his body so I began washing mine as well. Brent pulled me under the water towards him so that I could rinse off. He leaned over, grabbed my breast, and placed my nipple in his mouth.

          “Yes”, I thought to myself, “it’s about to go down”.

          Brent let go of my nipple only to kiss me gently on my lips. I rubbed my hands on his chest. I dropped one hand down to his manhood. Brent was truly packing down there. I bit my lip as I got down on my knees and took him into my mouth. I was surprised at myself the way that I was sucking this man off. Brent looked down at me and told me that he couldn’t take it anymore and that he had to have me.

          We exited the shower and went into the bedroom where Brent bent me over the bed and drove that big thing deep into my pussy. Brent grabbed a hold of my waist as I clenched the sheets.

          “Yes daddy, give it to me”, I yelled out to Brent.

          “I'm giving it to you”, Brent hollered back. “This is……….is………….is my puuuuuu-ahhhhhhhh!”

          I felt Brent pull out of me and place his dick on my ass.

          “Did you just cum?”

          “Yeah” Brent said breathing heavily. “Your pussy is too good, I couldn’t help it.”

          “Ok, well it’ll last longer on the second round.”

          “Of course” Brent replied.

          Brent got a wash cloth and wiped my backside. He pulled back the sheets and got in the bed. I placed my head on his chest and massaged him to get him back up again. Hearing heavy breathing and a slight whistling sound, I looked up at Brent.

          “Are you sleeping?” I asked him.

          “No, no. We still have to go again”, Brent said.

          As soon as that was said, Brent turned over on his side and started snoring. I laid awake for what seemed like forever in disbelief of what just happened.

          The next morning I awoke to Brent licking on my breasts. I felt his erection against my leg. I got wet immediately.

“Morning sex?” I thought out, “Now this is more like it”.

I rolled over on top of him and eased down onto his dick. Grinding my hips, I began to work him over. From the look on Brent’s face, I could tell that he was enjoying the ride. I started going faster and faster. Brent stopped me and rolled me over into the missionary position. He placed my legs on his broadened shoulders and guided his well endowed friend into my throbbing vagina. Brent started stroking my kat with the swiftness. Getting into the groove, I gyrated to his rhythm.

“Uhhhhhhh!”

Brent pulled out and came on my stomach.

“What the hell!” I yelled out. “What was that? Don’t tell me that’s all you got.”


Needless to say, that was it. Later that evening while back at home, I called Nia.
“Hey Nia, I saw that I have a missed call from you. What’s going on girl?”

“Nothing too much” Nia responded. “I was just checking up on you because I haven’t heard from u in a while.”

“Well, I spent the night at Brent’s last night, and girl let me tell you….”

“Really?” Nia interrupted. “What a coincidence. I went out with Chad last night.”

“Hold up, did you say Chad? I thought you didn’t like him?”

“Well I decided to call him up one day and we’ve been having some entertaining conversations. He asked me to go out with him and I did, but forget that, tell me about your night with Brent. I know he laid it down.”

“I’ll tell you, but tell me about your date first. Now this I have to hear”, I said laughing.

Giving me the short version, Nia began telling me about her date. “Well, he picked me up from home and he was a real gentleman from beginning to end. He opened the car door for me every time, building doors, he pulled out my chair so that I could sit, and before we had dinner, he spread the napkin across my lap.”

“Sounds nice, but that’s that punk shit.” I said as Nia and I both laughed.

She continued telling me. “Girl this guy loves to walk. I had on heels and we walked around down town and around the park. He bought me flowers from a vendor, and we went on a carriage ride. By the time we got back to my place, my feet were killing me from all of that damn walking. Because of me complaining about my feet aching from all the walking, he carried me from the car to the house. I thought to myself, ‘Here comes the game, he just wants to come inside.’ I unlocked the door and he brought me in. Girl when I say this guy is something else, he is something else. He placed me gently onto the sofa, turned my TV on, and asked me if he could get me something to drink as if it was his place. Rene, he treated me like royalty in my own house. I didn’t know what to do or how to act. I have never been treated in such a way. He put a movie in the dvd player and he massaged my feet for the duration of the movie. Once it was over, he decided that he was going to leave because it was late. Girl something in me did not want this man to leave. I asked him to stay awhile longer. He obliged, so I positioned myself on the sofa to lay my head in his lap and we talked in the dark. One thing led to another. Our conversation led to a kiss, the kiss led to more kisses, which led to touching, foreplay, and that led to our clothes coming off. Rene this man fucked me all over my house and in so many positions like we were auditioning for a porno flick. He had my body screaming.”

“Are you sure we’re talking about the same dorky Chad, Brent’s friend?” I asked unbelievingly.

“Girl yes! I was shocked too” Nia said. “Rene!”

“What?”

“Rene!”

“What Nia?”

“Re-naaay!”

“Girl shut up and tell me!” I scorned at Nia.

“Rene, Chad came, and he still wasn’t through.

“WHAT?!!!”, I yelled out uncontrollably.

“Yes” Nia continued on. “He came, his dick got back hard almost immediately, and he proceeded to wear my pussy out. Girl I……………..

I hung the phone up on Nia. I could not believe that shit. How could that book worm looking lame give her the fucking of her life while I got, I got, shit, I don’t know what it was that I got. (S.M.H. and rolling my eyes in disbelief)

* Thank you to Alicia for helping me out with the names of my characters. Fellas, she's very sexy and ladies, she can keep you up to date with the latest fashions and styles. Follow her on twitter at ----->  @AliciaStyle


4 comments:

  1. I really enjoy it the story line with the characters. The title Fallacious Perceptions was very fitting. Brent & Rene: It looked like someone got played out sexually. People, who talk so much about their bedroom skills, are truly not about it. All that talk and not being able to back it up is a woman’s worst nightmare in my opinion. Sadly, for Rene it came true.
    Nia & Chad: I’m glad that Nia took a chance on the less flashy guy. Chad may have been shy but he brought it. The ones you least excepting to bring it can surprise you.
    Overall, I enjoyed myself while reading this and the visual you brought in the story was really good. Another good one!! Keep on writing!! Looking forward to more.

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  2. Poetic Butterfly: Thank you . I'm glad that you liked it. I was a little skeptical about this story because I didn't know how people would take it. I hope that i can continue to please you with my stories.

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